Zub Tales

The original version of Makeshift page 37 is one of those pages that makes me cringe every time I see it:

Colby’s run looks incredibly lame and the whole page looks rushed because…. well because it was. I really like the face in panel 2 but the other two panels just drive me bonkers. When I started figuring out how much work would be involved in remastering the pages for print, I knew I’d have to change that page or it would drive me crazy forever.

Figure drawing, a better understanding of dynamic movement, more time and stronger draftmanship… here’s the results:

And here’s the new version of the page as it will be in the book, complete with better lettering:

Obviously the other pages won’t be as drastic as all that. 🙂